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"the only thing that matters is what is on this page"

Jillian Hess
Sep 26, 2022
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Noted is a month old! I’m so thankful for all of you who have subscribed, liked, shared, recommended, and commented. It means the world to me.

As an academic, I’m not used to getting such immediate feedback from readers, and I have to say, it’s pretty great! Here’s to month #2!

And now, Robert Caro’s notes…


If you want to publish award-winning history books that total well over 1,000 pages each, you’ve got to have an organizational system. Unsurprisingly, Robert Caro’s got one. We, mere mortals, can glimpse it by reading his most recent book, Working. Or, by visiting the New York Historical Society, which has an ongoing exhibit on Caro’s methods.

Caro’s notes on Robert Moses, the New York Historical Society

Even though his readers usually have to wait at least 10 years between books, Caro jokes that he’s actually a very fast writer. It’s the research that takes forever. And the research takes so long because Caro has a deep appreciation for truth in all its complexity. “The more of those facts you get…the closer you’re coming to whatever truth there is.”

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And we have to start from there, because, if not, the foundation of democracy crumbles. Caro explains,

I don’t think there’s anything more serious for a democracy than what’s happening right now, where, for many reasons, we’re losing belief in facts and truth.

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Reading gives us access to one kind of information. The body has a different sort of truth. While researching Lyndon Johnson (we are waiting for the 5th installment of this biography), Caro and his wife, Ina, moved to rural Texas Hill Country. Living there for three years gave the Caros an intimate sense of how the future president grew up.

Caro recounts how a Hill-Country woman challenged him:

You’re a city boy. You don’t know how heavy a bucket of water is, do you?

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Once Caro lifted a full bucket from the well, he understood just how difficult life was in early 20th-century Hill Country.

There are many other stories like this that show Caro’s dedication to his projects. And through it all, he took copious notes. Here are some highlights from different stages of his writing process.


Interviewing

Caro didn’t set out to be a biographer. He was interested in power — what it is, how people get it, and what they do with it. Given this interest, Caro was also concerned with his interviewees’ motives. So he warns himself:

Be very careful. This guy just wants you to say something that he can quote all over town.

“Turn Every Page” Exhibit, New York Historical Society

Caro’s note-pads are filled with reminders to himself. For example, to make sure interviewees have silences to fill, Caro has scribbled “SU” throughout his notes — a reminder to shut up.

All of these notes end up in carefully labelled files:

Files on Robert Kennedy, Screenshot from PBS Newshour

Outlining

Caro outlines his books before he starts writing. Then he pins the outline on his cork board. Once he has finished working on a page, he draws a line through the center.

“Turn Every Page” Exhibit, New York Historical Society
Caro, editing outlines on his cork board

Adding Evidence

Then, Caro creates a second outline that includes all the evidence he has gathered from his extensive research and interviews.

“Turn Every Page” Exhibit, New York Historical Society

Notes to Self, Scattered around the Office

Caro writes the best notes to himself! Check out Caro’s lamp with a note attached: “Is there desperation on the page?”

Caro’s lamp with note, “Is there desperation on the page?”— you can see this lamp just behind Caro in the photo above. “Turn Every Page,” New York Historical Society

Other notes include reminders of what to cut from the draft, what to put into the draft, and how the reader ought to feel when reading a particular section.

Don’t put in any more on RK in the 1st section. Don’t ruin that wonderful rhythm.

DON’T RUIN IT!

And, my personal favorite:

The only thing that matters is what IS on this page

Caro’s notes to himself, New York Historical Society

To-do lists

Once Caro has an entire draft, he creates lengthy to-do lists for himself.

Caro’s to-do list of “things that have to go in.” New York Historical Society

I especially love the following items on the to-do list:

7 “Do you have any idea how many paragraphs you start with ‘and’?”

11 POWER REVEALS — it’s not in anywhere!

Of course, #11 is the subtext of Caro’s work — power doesn’t shape a person; it reveals the person. And then there’s #14, a great example of how Caro talks to himself

14 CASON! - you MUST have her. How can you not?

I assume the “Cason” Caro refers to is Betty Cason Hickman who was in the room (taking notes) when Kennedy talked with Johnson about the vice presidency.

Tracking Word Count

Caro aims for 1,000 words a day. Sometimes he exceeds his goal. Sometimes he falls short. For every day that he writes zero words, he gives a reason such as his son (Chase); travel (Italy); or just plain fatigue (lazy). Even with his ambitious working schedule, Caro reserves Sunday for rest.

Caro held himself accountable while writing The Power Broker. On the left hand side, he marks the total word count for each week. New York Historical Society

Writing is hard work. And it’s comforting to know that even Caro had days when he felt “lazy.” There was a time when I used to religiously document my word counts. Perhaps it’s time to get back to it.

Do any of you keep track of word counts? Has it worked for you?


A note on Ina

I loved the exhibit, but as a researcher, I’m left wanting more. It drives me crazy when I see a notebook behind glass and can’t turn the pages. In particular, I want to know more about Ina, Caro’s wife, and the notes she took. The two worked together on all of his books.

While Robert Caro gives ample credit to Ina in Working, she is mostly absent from this exhibit, with a few exceptions. While doing research for The Power Broker, the two of them went to Jones Beach to tally visitors by race. It seems Robert Moses was, indeed, successful in keeping people of color away from this particular park.

Robert and Ina Caro’s tally of visitors to Jones Beach by race (from left to right: White, Black, and Latinx visitors), August 20th 1969 from 10:30-1pm. They documented the weather conditions at the top. New York Historical Society

And there is a photo of Ina and Robert Caro getting an honorary doctorate from CUNY. (Go CUNY!)

I contacted the archives at the New York Historical Society to ask about Ina and learned that some of her notes are probably in the exhibit, but that it’s very difficult to tell who was writing what. The NYHS is still cataloguing the collection — Caro donated all his papers to them — and they should be available for research by the Spring. When they’re ready, I’m getting back on the subway and heading back to the Upper West Side.

Till next week,

Jillian


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Caro, 2019 PBS Newshour Interview

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Caro, 2019 PBS Newshour Interview

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Caro, Working

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Michael Estrin
Writes Situation Normal
Oct 6, 2022Liked by Jillian Hess

I love this & I just subscribed, Jillian! Caro's SU is similar to something I write in my interview notebooks, although I'm more profane and a little more wordy because I write STFU. Such a good reminder to just let people fill the silence. That's when the money quotes happen.

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Tom Pendergast
Writes Out Over My Skis
Sep 26, 2022Liked by Jillian Hess

Jillian, I loved this one--all the organizational stuff especially, perhaps it’s because I fall short there. I note my word count for the day, but I don’t track it ... perhaps I should try.

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